Which ending should i use? *Spoiler*
Posted: Fri Jun 25, 2010 3:00 am
This has been bugging me for a while, which ending shall i use for Syrina's Return?
Talon removed his paw from Zion’s shoulder a smile on his face. “Well done, Zion. I’m proud of you; I didn’t have to kill you either. Which is a good thing or I wouldn’t be able to join you in Draco.”
He took a step back from Zion’s lifeless body then closed his eyes and lifted his head towards the heavens. He vanished into nothingness as a warm wind rushed towards him.
Two young adult bronze dragons, one male and the other was female were walking towards a collapsed rock wall. The male shifted a boulder with ease, revealing a dragon’s arm. Scaly skin still clung to the bones.
“That’s nasty, Diego.” Said the female.
“Its from our clan, Bella. He or she has been here for a while.”
“The dragon was a male, an elder to be correct.” Spoke a male from above them.
They looked to see Shadowfax as he landed on a rock.
“Who is he, Shadowfax? He must have been a powerful elder.”
“He was, his name is Talon.”
“What?! That’s impossible!”
Diego said.
“Yeah, he fought in the third war.” Bella said.
“And yet, he came out unharmed when Syrina’s group retreated. Talon died two years before Syrina was brought back to this world.”
“Why didn’t he go to Draco?” Bella asked.
“It wasn’t his time, his body may have died but his spirit couldn’t leave until Syrina was defeated once more.”
“Did he leave this world- I mean, has his spirit finally left this world?”
“Yes, he left moments ago, his spirit can finally rest in peace in Draco. My time will come as well, but until that day comes I will fly alone and use every last wing beat.” He then took flight towards the east, the two dragons watched until the great bird was well out of their sight.
They looked back at the decayed dragon arm. What was in store for Kiarows now that the greatest and most noble Puntars were gone? Only time will tell.
Or...
Talon removed his paw from Zion’s shoulder a smile on his face. “Well done, Zion. I’m proud of you; I didn’t have to kill you either. Which is a good thing or I wouldn’t be able to join you in Draco.”
He took a step back from Zion’s lifeless body then closed his eyes and lifted his head towards the heavens. He vanished into nothingness as a warm wind rushed towards him.
Two pure white animals; one was a white Grizzly, the other was a white she wolf with bright gold eyes sat on a ridge not far from where the wolves and dragon lay.
"Rest well, Talon. You've earned it." The she wolf said.
The white bear shifted its paws before looking at the white wolf. "May I be so bold and ask why you left, Lady Aniu?"
Aniu sighed before replying. "I left because i had a destiny of my own that i needed to fulfill, Miguel." She said looking north east toward the last elf city, her eyes were unreadable.
"And has it been fulfilled?" The white bear asked.
"Yes, Syrina is once again dead and the Guardians have returned, every thing is as it should be," Aniu said before standing. "Come, Miguel. Let us return to the Guardians, Kiarows is once again at peace."
Miguel watched his leader disappeared into the brush, before heading after her, he turned his gaze back to the bodies of Kiarow' best Warriors, with them gone is was once again the duty of the Guardians to maintain peace within the boarders of Kiarows, like they had done so many years ago.
What do you guys think, you like the first ending or the second ending better?
Talon removed his paw from Zion’s shoulder a smile on his face. “Well done, Zion. I’m proud of you; I didn’t have to kill you either. Which is a good thing or I wouldn’t be able to join you in Draco.”
He took a step back from Zion’s lifeless body then closed his eyes and lifted his head towards the heavens. He vanished into nothingness as a warm wind rushed towards him.
Two young adult bronze dragons, one male and the other was female were walking towards a collapsed rock wall. The male shifted a boulder with ease, revealing a dragon’s arm. Scaly skin still clung to the bones.
“That’s nasty, Diego.” Said the female.
“Its from our clan, Bella. He or she has been here for a while.”
“The dragon was a male, an elder to be correct.” Spoke a male from above them.
They looked to see Shadowfax as he landed on a rock.
“Who is he, Shadowfax? He must have been a powerful elder.”
“He was, his name is Talon.”
“What?! That’s impossible!”
Diego said.
“Yeah, he fought in the third war.” Bella said.
“And yet, he came out unharmed when Syrina’s group retreated. Talon died two years before Syrina was brought back to this world.”
“Why didn’t he go to Draco?” Bella asked.
“It wasn’t his time, his body may have died but his spirit couldn’t leave until Syrina was defeated once more.”
“Did he leave this world- I mean, has his spirit finally left this world?”
“Yes, he left moments ago, his spirit can finally rest in peace in Draco. My time will come as well, but until that day comes I will fly alone and use every last wing beat.” He then took flight towards the east, the two dragons watched until the great bird was well out of their sight.
They looked back at the decayed dragon arm. What was in store for Kiarows now that the greatest and most noble Puntars were gone? Only time will tell.
Or...
Talon removed his paw from Zion’s shoulder a smile on his face. “Well done, Zion. I’m proud of you; I didn’t have to kill you either. Which is a good thing or I wouldn’t be able to join you in Draco.”
He took a step back from Zion’s lifeless body then closed his eyes and lifted his head towards the heavens. He vanished into nothingness as a warm wind rushed towards him.
Two pure white animals; one was a white Grizzly, the other was a white she wolf with bright gold eyes sat on a ridge not far from where the wolves and dragon lay.
"Rest well, Talon. You've earned it." The she wolf said.
The white bear shifted its paws before looking at the white wolf. "May I be so bold and ask why you left, Lady Aniu?"
Aniu sighed before replying. "I left because i had a destiny of my own that i needed to fulfill, Miguel." She said looking north east toward the last elf city, her eyes were unreadable.
"And has it been fulfilled?" The white bear asked.
"Yes, Syrina is once again dead and the Guardians have returned, every thing is as it should be," Aniu said before standing. "Come, Miguel. Let us return to the Guardians, Kiarows is once again at peace."
Miguel watched his leader disappeared into the brush, before heading after her, he turned his gaze back to the bodies of Kiarow' best Warriors, with them gone is was once again the duty of the Guardians to maintain peace within the boarders of Kiarows, like they had done so many years ago.
What do you guys think, you like the first ending or the second ending better?